WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in the first person
One day I went to QE2 . When I arrived I took my bag and went to put
on my togs, they were red and blue. I cannon balled into the pools
then I went to go on the hydroslide. I grab a doughnut, the doughnut had chocolate
on it and then I went on the hydroslide with my big brother. It was fun but
scary and splashy! We had to get off because we were dizzy. I went
to take my togs off and went on the bus and went home.
